Ebonfire
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Post by Ebonfire on Jul 6, 2009 15:44:59 GMT -5
Saturate heart deep
Along this path you walk
Time marked is soon enough
Until it begins to matter
Rather, that you note it does
Amaze at least one heart to be
Thankful for having known you
Enough, to saturate another in turn.
Vicki Perry©7/09
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Post by polonius on Jul 6, 2009 21:57:36 GMT -5
A very soggy conceit, Vicky, with the involuted reasoning of a true metaphysical poet.
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Post by Artemis on Jul 8, 2009 4:21:25 GMT -5
Very beautiful write with soft undertones and a glowing mood. I loved this, so lovely. Kerry xx exalt
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Ebonfire
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Post by Ebonfire on Jul 8, 2009 17:05:13 GMT -5
Issy I guess we just exchanged exalts, I loved yours too.  Polonius, you always flip and turn the words and bring them back to meaning. I love it. Peace, C2W |
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Post by apocalypticjay on Jul 13, 2009 3:24:44 GMT -5
Beautifully metaphoric this piece V, you manage to solidify the meaning of friendship is the wettest kind of way hehe x
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Ebonfire
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Post by Ebonfire on Aug 1, 2009 13:41:12 GMT -5
Thanks sweetie, this is different for me so...you know. Appreciate your words.
~lol when I wrote this, I don't know how I placed it in this board, for it is surely not classical. Surprised it wasn't moved. So sorry, won't happen again, an honest slip up.
Ebonfire
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