Post by ARTHUR KELLY on Apr 17, 2009 10:59:00 GMT -5
Secrets, Whispers and tales, Hints without conclusions, Sordid, Painful, by friends that were, Hush-hush. Shadows, Sorrowful tears from their half-truths, Gossips painting pictures, Finger pointing, Shaded. Giggle, Suspicions dance To the devils’ tempo, And not to the tune of our love, Laugh.
You know, this site is just filled with raw talent. My breath is taken away with everything I read, sincerely. Arthur this is just astounding, you have this wonderful way with words, your mind is just wonderful, creative and I love your work so much. This form is lovely, the subject forbidden and slightly naughty. I loved it very much. I owe you a cookie my dear freind, and well deserved. Take care, love Kerry xx
Post by stacy (FINALLY back!) on Apr 25, 2009 15:24:01 GMT -5
I honestly have no idea how you managed to capture every sordid little detail of an affair, but you did and you made it look so easy. Every single word was spot on. I'm speechless...really. I was wondering what a reverse cinquain was as well, and you taught me something today. Thank so much for that.