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Post by ARTHUR KELLY on Jun 26, 2009 11:13:56 GMT -5
 Nervous, anxious, anticipation “Number nine!”, shouts the timekeeper my number, time to focus ten miles of pain ahead Visualise the course Countdown to hell “Five…four…three …two….one …GO!” |
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Post by Saffron on Jun 28, 2009 21:54:36 GMT -5
Mr Kelly, This nonet is excellent. You show the anticipation to a degree I can feel the excitement build rather than just read about it. I enjoyed this immensely and now wonder what the outcome was?  Penny (great avy  ) |
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Post by stacy (FINALLY back!) on Jul 1, 2009 14:56:04 GMT -5
Oh the anticipation in this. You conveyed anxiousness so well to the reader. A wonderfully crafted and well expressed nonet. ***Applause***
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Post by apocalypticjay on Jul 17, 2009 9:52:04 GMT -5
Not only do you cycle you love to watch on t.v, filling me in on my ignorance, I really enjoyed your company my friend, a nice tipple and putting the world of poetry to rights...lol as if. A really good personic write! Much enjoyed!
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Post by Artemis on Jul 18, 2009 7:10:40 GMT -5
:-*Wonderful writing Arthur, I loved this so much, you captured tension, excitement and a great story too ... K xx
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