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Post by Jamie~poetshare.forumotion.com on Jun 25, 2009 12:31:16 GMT -5
[bgcolor=Pink] Genuine charity escapes you,
Broken, no use for empathy--
Incidental emotion
Detracting from what’s real--
Shadows form your core
How pitiful.
You stone cold
Heartless
Bitch |
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Post by polonius on Jun 26, 2009 4:51:01 GMT -5
Obviously a piece written after a traumatic betrayal, replete with bitterness and imprecation. Let's hope the bitch's umbrella breaks in a rainstorm.
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Post by stacy (FINALLY back!) on Jul 1, 2009 14:55:29 GMT -5
I loved this Jamie, but I loved the last part "You stone cold heartless bitch". Reminds me of me when Bob makes me angry. He says I'm colder than a hard winters night...roflmao. Also reminds me of a few gals I know. Great write. I loved it!
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Post by apocalypticjay on Jul 17, 2009 9:49:39 GMT -5
Jamie remind me never to get on your bad side! This was a great form, the shape of the heart added to the irong for me. Deep creative and venting, you have a briliant quill my friend!
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Post by Saffron on Jul 17, 2009 16:56:42 GMT -5
Oh. Hell. Yes. Jamie, you know your stuff my friend. Love this one. Would you mind if I borrow it? Us Italians can be long-winded at times, and this says all that needs to be said.   I especially love the stone cold additive.  Lita PS. Did you loose something?? |
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Post by Artemis on Jul 18, 2009 7:12:35 GMT -5
Gosh Jamie ... I never saw THIS side to your gentle nature ... You have me worried lad ... great write, kudos on scaring me  K xx |
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I especially love the stone cold additive.
Lita 
K xx 
