A wish for you...

[bluedove]

[glow=red,2,300]Let's dance the dance of yesterday...won't you be my partner? We're all going down to the park to play...
How I wish you could come out today.

Wondrous slides and tall trees abound,
when you get well you'll be able to see...
There will always be a seat for you, right next to me.

If you came out today, I wouldn't push you away...the others are scared, but I know there is nothing to fret.
When you're ready you'll be right where you should...

Legs dangling long, high up in the air...
Just a child, so fancy and free...not a care in the world
that's what you most aptly deserve...

We'll climb so high...just you and I...we'll reach for the clouds, and never come down. [/glow]

[Harklight]

Welcome to Poet Share, bluedove!
All children deserve to be carefree: it's too sad when they're unwell. I like how you skirted around the illness, mentioning it only in passing to establish your story's foundation. A sweet write and enjoyed. H x

[bluedove]

H,

Thanks for the kind welcome and thoughtful comment...

Much appreciated,

Gabi

[Artemis]

This was a beautiful and caring write bluedove just like you Your heart is big and warm and giving which shines through in your writing. This is such a lovely idea and your imagery was astounding ... you've actually inspired me. Exalat, loved this write. K xxx

[bluedove]

Thanks Kerry...I am glad that you liked it, and that it inspired you in some way...

Your friend,

Gabi

P.S. Thanks also for the exalt!

[Myth]

Written with such caring and concern indicative of the unconditional love from an innocent child for another. Very heartwarming and lovely. The sympathy was calming and serene, intertwined with a bit of sadness and longing.

I enjoyed it very much, well done.