Welcome to Poet Share, bluedove! All children deserve to be carefree: it's too sad when they're unwell. I like how you skirted around the illness, mentioning it only in passing to establish your story's foundation. A sweet write and enjoyed. H x
"Great spirits have always encountered violent opposition from mediocre minds." ~ Albert Einstein
This was a beautiful and caring write bluedove just like you Your heart is big and warm and giving which shines through in your writing. This is such a lovely idea and your imagery was astounding ... you've actually inspired me. Exalat, loved this write. K xxx
Written with such caring and concern indicative of the unconditional love from an innocent child for another. Very heartwarming and lovely. The sympathy was calming and serene, intertwined with a bit of sadness and longing.
I enjoyed it very much, well done.
Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. ~Carl Sandburg