astroannie
Apprentice Member
Baseball Poetess
Posts: 107
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Post by astroannie on Jan 4, 2010 21:53:23 GMT -5
My cookies have gone missing and I don't know where they are I planned to give them to my friends as symbols of good cheer A dozen monster cookies, each one shaped into a star
The finest of the recipes in my small repertoire This was to be the final batch that I baked up this year My cookies have gone missing and I don't know where they are
I left them in the pantry, they were too big for the jar I set them on the bottom shelf next to my husband's beer A dozen monster cookies, each one shaped into a star
Whichever person took them, left the pantry door ajar It isn't like my homemade goods routinely disappear My cookies have gone missing and I don't know where they are
I find the circumstances are a little bit bizarre I guess I need to bake some more before my friends get here A dozen monster cookies, each one shaped into a star
I found crumbs in the driveway where my husband parks his car If it turns out he took them, I will kick him in the rear My cookies have gone missing and I don't know where they are A dozen monster cookies, each one shaped into a star
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Post by Artemis on Jan 5, 2010 8:40:54 GMT -5
Annie congratulations on winning the competition, great challenge piece which is so hard to write in this form, loved it, Kerry xx
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Post by Harklight on Jan 11, 2010 0:02:24 GMT -5
Congratulations Annie!! A deserving winner: posting a villanelle in the Bi-annual competition is admirable and appreciated. Shelving cookies next to beer invites trouble: your husband probably enjoyed the day less with his sore rear. Good writing. H x
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Post by NewMan™ on Feb 25, 2010 6:02:37 GMT -5
hey, I have an alibi *munches on cookie* I was busy reading poems when those monster cookies went missing..
I would ask your husband again..
Brilliant, I love cookie poems
~ Daniel
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