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Post by Max on Dec 8, 2009 11:30:29 GMT -5
This one had a boyfriend No thanks, I’m done with the triangles And eating the leftovers isn’t my kind of angleWhat is love? Is love that warming feeling that you can’t describe When you’re looking into another’s eyes? Or is love something that you feel between your thighs Is your love when the diamond is the perfect size? That one is a sweetheart But I’ll be across the ocean in the winter Better to break it now then to gradually splinterWhat is love? My love is the Atlantis of my heart’s memory Hidden deep beneath, where you cannot reach Like the eye of a storm approaching the coarse beach Fluttering for a lost moment, claimed by the sea Two decades and no love Among life’s transitions, at least I’ve had some fun I know that one of these days, the time will come For me to find a beautiful girl with whom to share the stars and sun She will be a goddess, and I will treat her as one But that can wait a little bit, while for the moment I am still young
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Post by carousal on Dec 9, 2009 7:16:08 GMT -5
Right on Max, plenty of time to make the right choice. Girls to me when young was like being given a great box of chocolates, one is delicious but there are so many left to sample.
One tip, for what its worth, she may be beautiful but could she be your best friend? Think about it.
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Post by Artemis on Jan 1, 2010 8:30:27 GMT -5
Max I've missed your writing. This just reminded me of how talented you are - what a piece of poetry! Wise words, it was almost like a conversation going on inside your head, like the dark and the light conflicting? I loved it and so so very wise too ... go live while you study and adventure awaits you, much love, Kerry xxx
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