An acute write, Stacy. Minimising, like this, accentuates your points. I like the reversal of stanza 1 in stanza 3. You are a strong person: "Here I am", "Life is good" - you will be and life will only improve. Enjoyed, H x
"Great spirits have always encountered violent opposition from mediocre minds." ~ Albert Einstein
Yes appreciate what you have, so many have so much less. when I hear children blessed with their Cell phones, X Box’s and designer trainers at £50 a throw look out at a perfect day and sulk “I’m bored” it makes me eat glass.
A nice tight poem that speaks volumes, well done Stacy
Last Edit: Nov 23, 2009 9:19:42 GMT -5 by carousal