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Post by stacy (FINALLY back!) on Nov 19, 2009 21:37:59 GMT -5
Here I Am
Here I am. Life is good. Fast and slow, Up and down...
Yet I search For more rest. Each day is long And quite the test.
Up and down... Fast and slow, Life is good. Here I am.
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Post by Harklight on Nov 20, 2009 15:45:46 GMT -5
An acute write, Stacy. Minimising, like this, accentuates your points. I like the reversal of stanza 1 in stanza 3. You are a strong person: "Here I am", "Life is good" - you will be and life will only improve. Enjoyed, H x
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Post by carousal on Nov 23, 2009 9:19:02 GMT -5
Yes appreciate what you have, so many have so much less. when I hear children blessed with their Cell phones, X Box’s and designer trainers at £50 a throw look out at a perfect day and sulk “I’m bored” it makes me eat glass.
A nice tight poem that speaks volumes, well done Stacy
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Post by parttimepoet on Jan 27, 2010 11:30:52 GMT -5
I enjoyed this read, a lot said in few words. I liked the reversal of stanzas 1 and 3, very effective. Great little write, thanks for sharing.
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