Colour me in

[Artemis]

My outline is solid now,
Tough times happen afterall.
My sketchy lines filled by the year,
Learning strength right after a fall.

Sometimes it was like joining dots,
There were times it all went wrong.
The person I was had broken bits
Like a chorus without a song.

So now maybe I am whole except
Some parts are wearing thin.
What I need after all this time
Is for you to colour me in

Artemis x[/center]

[Ebonfire]

Oh this was so good Kerry. I understand, the outline is there waiting to be filled in. You wrote this beautifully, and the title is very fitting.

Ebonfire

[gentlewind ~~(Serenity)]

Wow... Nice... the flow was excellent Kerry and you drew a picture in my mind so well. I like.... cookie.. dear.... I will color you with only happy colors..

hugs

Nanc...

Gentle~wind

[Harklight]

The opening line is a credit to you, Kerry! The flow and rhythm plus rhyme make a good and easy read. I also like the presentation. Though it feels like you don't need anyone to do it for you ...
commencing colouring in now. Great write. H x

[Saffron]

KK, I wish you could see yourself from my viewpoint. Vibrant, alive, and pulsing with colors that can never be duplicated. You are an amazingly strong woman, and a wonderful poetess. I adore your ability to express yourself. *hug* Lady B