Cold Silence (Acrostic)

[Max]

Clear as the morning's dew
Our passion falls by the wayside
Leaving me blue and broken
Drowned by the tidal wave of your torment

Slipping from my grasp
I watch you walk away forever
Lesson learned the hard way
Entertainment is a dating commodity
Never enough to just be yourself
Coughing up my lungs crying out for you
Each cry returns an echo, bound to dissolve

[Artemis]

Very deep and emotive flow for an acrostic Max ... you managed to make this run so smoothly, a really hard task for this style of poetry. Excellent, Kerry xx exalt

[Harklight]

Fine word use and a flowing write, Max. Today it seems that dating is an "entertainment" commodity: enjoy for a while and then forget afterwards, disregard or discard. Good acrostic form. H x

[astroannie]

Very poignant. I like the flow of this, too, as the others mentioned, that's tough to do in an acrostic. I'm glad I clicked it.