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Post by Artemis on Sept 22, 2009 17:07:18 GMT -5
Wordsworth the Bookworm meets Shakespeare (kind of)Wordsworth munched at the spine of a book, Red in colour, pages unstuck. It must have been old as the pages were chewy He found his lips were sticky and gooey.
The magical tunnel took him right away, Through Arabian Nights to a midsummer day. It was nearing the end as the shadows were long And many dancers lined up in a throng.
Beautiful ladies in fetching attire Danced around daintily he stood and admired. The bard himself Mr Shakespeare was there, Silvery beard and flyaway hair.
He pointed at things and directed the cast, Wordsworth was pleased he had seen him at last. So many poems and stories he’d read By this man dressed in tights and a funny shaped head!
The night had turned starry the play was alive, Wordsworth sat next to the bard with such pride. Suddenly he woke at Macbeth’s mighty scream, He’d slept rather soundly through A Midsummer Night’s Dream!Wordsworth started out as a childrens book. I am thinking of maybe looking to get a poetry book published of his adventures. He lives in a victorian library along with a family of four. His friend is mousey, silk worm and they all fall into all kinds of books and have adventures. I thought of making it educational too for bedtime reading for younger children or children of all ages ... different levels of reading etc .... K x
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Post by Dr Fogg on Sept 22, 2009 17:28:49 GMT -5
Well if Fergy can do it with her stupid bloody helicopter I am sure you will, its a great basis for a whole series, Disney will of course pick it up and JK Rowling eat your heart out.
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Post by NewMan™ on Sept 22, 2009 18:21:49 GMT -5
what a wonderful write Kerry, Wordsworth is sure to delight everyone from small children to centuries old writers like the Bard himself.
Best of luck with your stories, be sure and test them out on us as you know we are children ourselves at heart.
Wordsworth is going to be the smartest worm in the apple!!
~ Daniel
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Post by carousal on Sept 23, 2009 11:00:47 GMT -5
Why not Kerry, nothing ventured, nothing gained. Personally I would keep it to a book formula. I’m ok with rhyme but some time ago I wrote a long story poem and was sweating blood before I finished it. You have much much more freedom without marrying the storyline to verse.
Give it a go; if I can help in any way, I’m here
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Post by prometheus on Sept 26, 2009 6:53:08 GMT -5
Excellent work Kerry...I think this has potential. You have interesting characters and a great setting. I don't necessarily agree that rhyme is not the way to go, certainly for the young...look at how successful Dr Seuss is around the world. I say "Go for it girl" make your dream a reality.
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