Disturbing images bombarding my psyche Inconceivable pain flooding all senses So many things left unsaid Taunting each and every waking moment Asking myself what has been kept from my eyes Never resting until exhaustion encompasses my mind Calling out to you, begging you to hear Every night, eyes held open, for maybe, just maybe
"If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you it's yours forever. If it doesn't then it was never meant to be."
this is really good. Distance is something I personally have to deal with every time I want to be with the woman I love but Distance and I have come to an understanding.. At night, when I dream, the distance goes away and is replaced by feelings I can not yet know.. during the day, the distance comes back and erases my memories of my dreams.
when I read this poem (twice) there was a line that really stood out to me.. It is Asking myself what has been kept from my eyes.. This speaks of secrets, of a trust misplaced.. I can remember those days, far into the past, when I should have asked myself the same question..
Really a wonderful job. Take care,
Dreams do come true, you just have to have faith in them.
Post by apocalypticjay on Sept 6, 2009 8:46:27 GMT -5
Distance can be that of a taunt my friend, and indeed everything you express in this piece can break you. You have to be strong and take each day like water flowing yet not always stable hehe, excellent write Sarah really deep!!