Winter's Chill (Acrostic)

[fairqueen]

WINTER’S CHILL

Whistling wind coming from the north
Is changing the atmosphere.
No more days of warmth because
The chill of winter is here.
Emotions fill my heart with pain
Remembering how we were.
Safe, secure in you and I,

Change like this wouldn’t occur.
Here you are, though, so cold to me.
Icicles have formed in your heart.
Looking into your eyes, I no longer see
Love. Winter’s chill has torn us apart.

[Harklight]

Aw, this is sad, Janya. Good phrasing in the opening four lines build towards the heartache. Your acrostic form is strong and fits the two word parts here. I'm blowing you our sunny days from the south, to make you warm and snug, knowing you are loved. (((Big hugs, Janet))) H x

[apocalypticjay]

I love this Janet as I love all of your poetry the depth connets with the readers relatability to the situation and its more than just emotive to me you make you reader feel the cold! Another great write!

[4rum]

Dear fairqueen;

You parallel winter's bite and lost love so very well. The two do seem to signify bitter ends ... to love ... to summers warmth and soul. Beautiful write.

4rum