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Post by Max on Aug 9, 2009 20:57:22 GMT -5
This is my first attempt in this board *fingers are crossed*  United by the law, geography and currency Separated by morality and political ideology Amongst the flames of argument, the result is anarchy |
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Post by apocalypticjay on Aug 10, 2009 16:12:54 GMT -5
Hey its a good start, it's what I started with acrostics tend to be the easiest of all the forms in my eyes. I really liked the political twist to this write, as you knew I probably would a well penned piece that reflects todays America in more ways than one!
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Post by Harklight on Aug 10, 2009 21:07:22 GMT -5
Your Acrostic form is good, Max. Topic-wise, different states have differing laws so it's not united and the separations are really noticable, mostly between North and South. The rhyme fits and your meter is good, mostly in U and A (though not essential in the form). Slightly longer acrostics are often easier. Keep going; this is a good start. H x
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Post by stacy (FINALLY back!) on Aug 24, 2009 15:32:20 GMT -5
I agree that this is a good start. Acrostics can be quite difficult, but I thought this was a gem. I can't wait to see more like this from you. Keep the thinking cap on, and keep the poetic pen rolling.  |
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