Saffron
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Daughter of Ecanus
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Post by Saffron on May 18, 2009 15:21:11 GMT -5
Jim, This is a wonderful and comforting picture. I can almost feel the breeze and the glass of ice cold tea in my hand. and of course, the book in my other hand. Marvelous writing.  Penny |
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Ebonfire
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Post by Ebonfire on May 19, 2009 18:22:22 GMT -5
Count me in Jim. It says comforting, and that's a good feeling to have my friend. This was homey, but then you're homey, so that's about right huh? LOL!
Ebonfire
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Post by NewMan™ on May 23, 2009 2:44:34 GMT -5
oog gosh Jim,
I remember days when I could go outside and fall asleep on my swing, just feeling the cool ocean breeze blow and listening to the outside birds sing their natural chorus.. Wonderful reflective tone in this my friend, I really enjoyed.
~ Daniel
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Post by polonius on May 27, 2009 23:59:22 GMT -5
This poem has a cosy ambience mingled comfortable decay, a relaxed sense of happy indifference. The mood is slothfully cheering.
Have an Exalt biscuit.
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