Ebonfire
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Post by Ebonfire on May 1, 2009 18:44:32 GMT -5
Grover’s horn is blowing ‘Come Morning’ through the cracks that are my soul a breeze is gently blowing time is lightening up my stroll.
His horn is really grooving now I’m thriving with each new beat Come Morning yeah, I see passions felt make one complete.
Some scattered pieces drifting floating outside my truth, Come Morning, smooth and easy now enables a clearer view.
Cobwebs fleeing from the rhythm of mellow melodies music lilt, Come Morning yes, play that do notes float like ribbons of silk.
‘Come Morning’ play...
Warm notes across my silken skin rhythms roam then settle in to my soul where the jumble is at The jazz just whispers, scat, scat, scat.
Opening my aura to the feel of swing Keeping me mellowed to do my thing
Come Morning play on...
Ebonfire
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Post by Artemis on May 2, 2009 1:57:36 GMT -5
:)This really caught my imagination with its beautiful imagery and style. Really well penned and a pleasure to read. Kerry xx
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Post by Harklight on May 4, 2009 22:56:07 GMT -5
Rhythmically reinforcing the scat bluesy theme. "Opening my aura to the feel of swing Keeping me mellowed to do my thing" "do my thing" is a very appropriate ending, in keeping with the times. Enjoyed this one, Ebonfire. H x
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Ebonfire
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Post by Ebonfire on May 5, 2009 16:44:10 GMT -5
Thanks much Kerry, glad you enjoyed.
Harklight, your comments much appreciated and glad you liked this.
Ebonfire
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Post by Jamie~poetshare.forumotion.com on May 5, 2009 18:50:14 GMT -5
Loved it, Ebonfire. This had a sway of its own and the beat is so smooth that the rhyme just slides in there. I confess that I now have to go find a better radio station on my alarm clock. What a way to wake up!
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Ebonfire
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Post by Ebonfire on May 7, 2009 18:26:50 GMT -5
Thanks Jamie. *She smiles* Come Morning is a particular song on the cd by Grover Washington. Ebonfire
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Post by Jim on May 9, 2009 11:21:03 GMT -5
this is perfect for reading outloud. both lyrical and musical, ... looks like it's shaping up to be a great day, eh?
peace
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