STOP THE VOICES!!

[Dr Fogg]

STOP THE VOICES




Excuse me! Are you talking to me?
I think you are, from your car, window ajar
What do you want? Do you want me?
I see, then let it be, doesn’t bother me you see!!!!!!!

STOP THE VOICES

You’re still talking, whilst I’m walking
Are you stalking? I live near Dalking
Just go please, you’re a disease
Like a sneeze, wheeze, Jeez!!!!!

STOP THE VOICES

Do I know you? I think not
Well not a lot, my brain is shot
I forgot, forgot what? I forgot
Rot, cot, hot, snot, slot, POT

STOP THE VOICES

Yes you, drive away, today
Go play I say, no way, faraday
Electrician, transmission, submission
Sex position, perdition, condition!!!!!!!





STOP THE VOICES PLEASE !!!!

Dr Fogg,


_{Copyright 2009}

[Max]

Bill, I think that you could use any combination of words and somehow it would be funny. This read to me like a delightful schizophrenic rambling, and I love those. I almost wet my drawers when I read "sex position", definitely caught me off guard. Excellent write, good sir!

[Dr Fogg]

Thank you Max, I wrote this for the insanity competion (in the other place) It is actualy based on my own experiences in dealing with people suffering from psycotic disorders. Many will verbalise their side of the conversation but you dont get to hear the other side (obviously) it often takes the form of word association. Its can be of course very tragic but at the same time amusing.

[ARTHUR KELLY]

I loved reading this bill, absolutely random-but still you managed a manic internal rhyme.

You are always a pleasure for me to read. So articulate, funny but underneath extremely clever and deep as is this poem.

sod it have an exalt!