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Post by Harklight on Jun 30, 2009 1:44:37 GMT -5
One Generation’s Leap
I saw her fascination in the caterpillar as it quietly crawled across the floor. Enthralled by her, then breaking the spell, I suggested it was safer out, than inside. Collecting it gently into her little hand so that all of the legs remained intact, she smiled at the tickling on her palm when she carefully released it outside; back into unnatural urban wilderness where it will eat cauliflowers.
Amazed at the influence of my words on this tiny person – words from me! This me; who’d shot at fluffy rabbits and eliminated impending butterflies that had threatened our food supplies. This me; who’d once bulldozed trees and microcosms of precious environs recklessly, destroying native aviaries, has also taught her what truly belongs and now cares for caterpillars.
~~~~~~ Copyright ©
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Ebonfire
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Post by Ebonfire on Jul 12, 2009 12:41:45 GMT -5
Congratulations HL
this was a conscious raising piece and the imagery was priceless.
Ebonfire
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Post by stacy (FINALLY back!) on Jul 12, 2009 14:18:17 GMT -5
Congratulations on the winning entry, harklight. I loved this and I am soooo happy that you won. Party time! Woo Hoo!
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Post by apocalypticjay on Jul 13, 2009 3:45:19 GMT -5
H you did a great job here, I remember readin this for the first time and being blown away, such experience and groth within a sentimental piece of beautiful writing, I love this piece you deserve this award!
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Post by kellygreen on Dec 5, 2009 10:52:50 GMT -5
There is true beauty in this poem.
Congrats,
kelly
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