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Summer
Jul 8, 2009 13:41:43 GMT -5
Post by cinda on Jul 8, 2009 13:41:43 GMT -5
HOAX OF SUMMER I was told it was summer, The calendar says the same But I find it hard to believe With all this much rain.
No need to worry about drought Or of anything not being green It’s just the temperature is not warm enough To sunbathing be seen.
I worked hard in my garden Waited too long for it to come up But now it is overgrown with all these weeds Green mold on the soil Knots of greens mixed of every kind Where the veggies are, Never mind!
I was told it was summer More like autumn it feels And only two more months We will be there - Frost in the air.
I was told it was summer The Hoax, okay, I’ve had enough Take all this rain back Give me some sun Please… Before two months later is here And autumn has begun.
~ Cinda Berard
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Summer
Jul 8, 2009 14:20:04 GMT -5
Post by Artemis on Jul 8, 2009 14:20:04 GMT -5
Cinda welcome to poetshare and this is a wonderful piece to start I know how you feel ususally, being from the UK, but so far apart from the last two days it's been beautiful here. I loved the rhyme and flow of this piece of poetry, it was nice and long with lots of imagery. Lovely, Artemis. xx ;D
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matw63
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Summer
Jul 9, 2009 8:54:55 GMT -5
Post by matw63 on Jul 9, 2009 8:54:55 GMT -5
Cinda - This poem for me represents that we should always enjoy what we have, rather than looking too far ahead. We should always try to enjoy the moment!!
Enjoyed!
Mat
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Summer
Jul 9, 2009 10:44:31 GMT -5
Post by apocalypticjay on Jul 9, 2009 10:44:31 GMT -5
Summer rain can be the most depressing of all natures 'mistakes' lol. I love weather and nature but wind and rain can drive you insane! I hope your garden is looking a little bit better now hehe!
Enjoyed too!
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