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Post by Artemis on Jul 8, 2009 5:23:37 GMT -5
Sadness spills like pools of blood
Amid the silence of her heart
Dawn usually brought cheer
Not this morning, soul like wood.
Each second a tear fell
Soon soaking emotional scars
Step away if only she could.
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Post by Jamie~poetshare.forumotion.com on Jul 8, 2009 13:35:15 GMT -5
I can't help but wonder if this is about something other than what it seems on its face, my friend. Cheer up, seeing you here every day has brought extra sunshine into my life. Skillfully penned and emotive as ever. *zalt*
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Post by Artemis on Jul 8, 2009 13:43:18 GMT -5
((((((((((((((((((((((((Jamie)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) that ^ is a cyber hug btw  you always make me smile xxK xx  |
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Ebonfire
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Post by Ebonfire on Jul 8, 2009 17:02:42 GMT -5
This was deep Issy girl, past the wording the imagery evoked was touching. Exalt,
Ebonfire
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Post by apocalypticjay on Jul 13, 2009 3:31:04 GMT -5
Brilliant Kerry, I don't often come into the 'forms[ as I'm not to terribly great at them, acrostic would probably be my favourite if I had one tho and you exicuted this piece brilliant with such emotive sadness. I loved it in a heartwrenching way hehe xx Exalt!
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cygnet
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Post by cygnet on Jul 23, 2009 12:54:06 GMT -5
oh sweetie, thats crushing...but on another note,,,it was amazing..I'm always in awe when I read something with so few stanza's that just grabs me...your terrific!
Love ya,
Lynn
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Post by fairqueen on Aug 10, 2009 20:34:30 GMT -5
Ahh, Kerry.. Really heartfelt. Very well done.
Love
Janet
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Post by Artemis on Aug 24, 2009 18:18:29 GMT -5
Thank you so much for the exalts and the lovely comments, as you know I write to get emotions out, always works pretty well for me ... love you all, K xxxxx |
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you always make me smile xxK xx 
