Sadness spills like pools of blood Amid the silence of her heart Dawn usually brought cheer Not this morning, soul like wood. Each second a tear fell Soon soaking emotional scars Step away if only she could.
Post by Jamie~poetshare.forumotion.com on Jul 8, 2009 13:35:15 GMT -5
I can't help but wonder if this is about something other than what it seems on its face, my friend. Cheer up, seeing you here every day has brought extra sunshine into my life. Skillfully penned and emotive as ever. *zalt*
Post by apocalypticjay on Jul 13, 2009 3:31:04 GMT -5
Brilliant Kerry, I don't often come into the 'forms[ as I'm not to terribly great at them, acrostic would probably be my favourite if I had one tho and you exicuted this piece brilliant with such emotive sadness. I loved it in a heartwrenching way hehe xx Exalt!