Ebonfire
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Post by Ebonfire on Jun 19, 2009 18:17:07 GMT -5
Spin the bottle and live a little or a lot if you’re a bold soul Repay the brush that stroked your cheek and woke you for the day. Stray into the wind, wrap the blue skies around your shoulders when the gray clouds threaten storms that can shatter all that matters. Thrust your heart into life’s center where waste turns to moments gone by... Hush and hear the lullaby that rocks the little babies when they cry and signify their being to the universe. Cry if you must, but feel it from the depths to be reminded that you’re living all of what is offered to the beat of your heart. Exhale and impart, Inhale and gather new ideas to blow stale winds awry with the freshness of each morn, when you rise to slay any dragon that threatens your spin through the pattern that purposes your destiny, determines your power, or slows your roll of the dice in this most precious breath called life. ~VLP 6/09
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Post by polonius on Jun 19, 2009 20:22:50 GMT -5
A jolly, rollicking celebration of the good things abounding, together with a robust warning to seize the moment, and to enjoy before the moment and it's bounty fades into nothingness. The poem combines gratititude to the divine and to nature, without being sanctimonious.
EXALT (shortly)
EXALTED
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Post by Artemis on Jun 20, 2009 4:03:10 GMT -5
Gosh after reading this I fel I could conquer the world! Uplifting and a great breath of fresh air, loved every line, Artemis xx exalt
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Post by Jamie~poetshare.forumotion.com on Jun 23, 2009 9:37:16 GMT -5
Talk about uplifting! This is ripe with inspiration--I want to go stand in a sunshower! *exalt* in a bit granted.
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Jim
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Post by Jim on Jun 24, 2009 9:09:08 GMT -5
talk about the power of positive thinking! I am also caught up in the inspiration and fortitude. take us higher ebonfire. you rock!
peace
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Ebonfire
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Post by Ebonfire on Jul 2, 2009 20:57:37 GMT -5
Polonius thank you dear for your reading and understanding. Who is that woman in your Avatar? None of mine probably, but what they heck, I had to ask. Thanks for exalt too friend. V
Stacey, much love and appreciation.
Jamie you're a sweetie, the sun would just rain upon you too.
Jim, you know I love your comments. Thanks so much.
Ebonfire
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Post by polonius on Jul 3, 2009 1:38:22 GMT -5
She was my favourite bawd until she disappeared to have a child with her cousin, so they could both stay in Australia.
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Ebonfire
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Post by Ebonfire on Jul 6, 2009 10:41:42 GMT -5
Ok then...interesting twist.
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