cinda
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Post by cinda on Mar 12, 2010 8:30:14 GMT -5
Number 44
Oh Great Eagle Number 44 is at the door. Change is the word Like never before.
Oh Great Eagle What was promised You That I will do.
Change is the word Change is the game What use to be the norm Will never be the same.
My pitch is Green Crank the money machine Spend our way Out of our debt – Out of work? Need not fret.
Print more money Spend our way through This is the change I promised you – Commerce, Trade Health Care too! These are things I will make come true!
Oh Great Eagle You are a Phoenix Risen anew The promises of change Have come True.
Copyrighted.
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Myth
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Post by Myth on Mar 12, 2010 11:55:11 GMT -5
Cleverly riddled with irony and sarcasm. It's so easy to make promises before you have the job. So hard to deliver once you actually discover you are just one man, who answers to millions, and those you thought allies, simply hope to someday take your place....
Well written, enjoyed.
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Post by apocalypticjay on Mar 16, 2010 7:54:52 GMT -5
Interesting write I thought at first stanza's were sarcasm but now I'm not so sure, maybe you respect what the country is trying to do to get out of the recession and the promises it has made to make it better for people, or maybe it was just sarcasm hehe.
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