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Post by Jamie~poetshare.forumotion.com on May 18, 2009 13:19:50 GMT -5
I see these great poems all over the place Exalting the best that I've read, I think I forgot one, and, egg on my face I cannot remember the thread!
Don't worry your noggin, I'll get to it quick And be caught up on "exalt(s) when . . ." Of course, once I find it and give it a click I'll have to "exalt when . . ." again!
The problem, you see, is you're all far too good. And the button itself way too slow So I have to make lists of exalts that I should Soon give out: the exalts that I owe.
I tell you, I wish I could do that in life-- Hit a button and make someone smile. On Demand Karma for spreading some Right. I could handle that power a while.
I'd walk down the street and then everyone watch, Maybe wiggle my nose, like Bewitched, And everyone's aura would eke up a notch, Their days oh-so-slightly enriched.
Alas, all I have is this button to push, Rewarding the finest I find, By now it's come back, so exalting I rush, May you also do so in kind.
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Saffron
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Post by Saffron on May 18, 2009 15:28:56 GMT -5
Jamie my dear, this is delightful. I just hopped along with the cadence, wearing a big smile on my face. The rhythm is perfect. The feel is happy and joyous. The world would be a better place if we could do this in real life. Love it. exalting I go. I love that smiley) Penny
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Post by polonius on May 23, 2009 23:31:15 GMT -5
A very exalting theme, and a jaunty rhythm to go with it. Of course, the giving of karma needn't be so vain-it can be a real expression of good regard.
So have a biscuit, Jamie.
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Post by kellygreen on May 28, 2009 5:25:57 GMT -5
Very clever variation on the song.
Much enjoyed~
kelly
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Jim
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Post by Jim on Jun 12, 2009 16:09:30 GMT -5
Ha! 'on demand karma!' I hear ya [grin]... some folk have a way of making others feel good about themselves just by their mere presence...I always feel that way about your posts. thank you Jamie.
peace
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