Post by apocalypticjay on Feb 25, 2010 8:59:06 GMT -5
Rainbow Skies Ahead
We sit upon the purple sky in circles, holding hands like the biggest band of mermaids- playing in pink soda; water splashing, whoever thought to share a thought everlasting.
Singing songs of yester-year so nonchalant, that fairies cast a spell and leapt through staries- all for the love of Jesus and his merry followers, trading licks with the forest trees and lightening leaves we come to be is this wonderland, where poetry bland will never haunt us-
here the great and gorgeous leave us breathless, talent seems to come so effortless.
There is no place I’d rather be- than with friends of such sublime poetry, which leaves us skating on ice and climbing cherry trees the view from here is so beautiful to me.
Oh Jay how I agree with you. Only the very best . How I loved your dreamlike imagery, your flawless flowing words of happiness and love. This warmed my heart, sang to me even and lifted already soaring spirits. Strange how one can move on, move UP and feel like this so quickly, this definitely deserves an exalt, absolutely beautiful writing as always, Ker xxxxxx EXALT
Lovin' your imagery in this - mixed with some nice metaphors which relate to a very idyllic place, almost heavenly; your appreciation of the writing and character of your peers makes for two wonderful adverts; one for your fellow poets, and one for your own talent. Much admired and enjoyed, you rock my friend! Mick
Wonderful, Jay!! This peals with renewed joy and contentment with apt metaphors. I had to check if you'd used a few BB words: it felt comfortably familiar in an original way. You lift all of us who read it. Bravo! H x
"Great spirits have always encountered violent opposition from mediocre minds." ~ Albert Einstein