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Post by Artemis on Feb 24, 2010 12:36:40 GMT -5
This circus shows tapestries with silken thread woven between the doubting days, a portal of glistening possibilities to be hungered for in magnificent ways.
Forgive this mind for it is blown to beyond a point of which return is closed; to delve to these depths of understanding this life, this excitement inside me grows.
From birth a seed was planted within no matter what trauma a light it will find. Bending, twisting reaching high to the end congruent spirit replaces the blind.
Copyright ©KDP 2010
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Post by apocalypticjay on Feb 24, 2010 13:29:34 GMT -5
This piece did make me smile Kerry, a very inspired piece. When one finds ones path in life they seem to take it with leaps and stride of fluidity and grace, I can see that is what you are doing my friend I am glad you feel this way, the excitment and the challenge will do you the world of good, great poem! Maybe should of posted it in JOY hehe
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Post by Harklight on Feb 27, 2010 6:40:23 GMT -5
Bright and meaningful, Kerry. Near-overwhelming enlightenment grows with each step, each of your chosen words. Flow through stanzas makes it fluid reading. Bravo! H x
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