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Post by Karla Bardanza on Feb 23, 2010 12:02:18 GMT -5
Instant of Inspiration
Mind walking slowly Instant enchantment Word made flesh Lines soothing a heart Verses murmured with care
Esthetic Emotion
Alliteration Consonance Onomatopeia Rhythm and flow Poems awakening
Refined Existence
Words striking invisible chords Brightness falling from the air Metaphors bewitching eyes Rhythm suffusing mind Art refining existence
Karla Bardanza
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Post by Artemis on Feb 23, 2010 12:47:48 GMT -5
This piece is inspiration in itself Karla, beautiful, clever and I'd say this is an epiphany moment? Much enjoyed, lovely language, Kerry xx
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Post by apocalypticjay on Feb 24, 2010 12:03:54 GMT -5
Pure poetic verse expressing the depth and creativity of literature and how it makes us feel and what it truly is as an art form and inspiration to many. I loved this piece well crafted and cleverly done. Brilliant Karla truly!!!
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Post by Karla Bardanza on Feb 24, 2010 19:25:23 GMT -5
Thanks Kerry and Prodigal Eques for your comments.Truly appreciated.
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Post by Ebonfire on Feb 27, 2010 17:36:25 GMT -5
The way it feels to grasp the meaning, to want to express it, then to do so...is poetry.
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Post by Karla Bardanza on Feb 27, 2010 19:50:34 GMT -5
I tried to capture three distinct moments when we write.Thanks for your great comment Ashley.
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Post by NewMan™ on Mar 1, 2010 13:13:58 GMT -5
hi Karla,
we don't always understand peoples poems, many times even our own work goes over our head, but we do relate to what we read even when we don't agree with it.
enjoyed this, the process we use for creating.. I'm sure it's similar to a painter.. to be inspired, to paint and then to observe the result..
tc,
~ Daniel
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Post by Karla Bardanza on Mar 1, 2010 20:26:14 GMT -5
Thanks for your words on my poem.
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