Very nicely constructed, Arthur. I think you have mastered this form. I think it's suited to songs more than other poetic forms, with the requirement for repetition. The challenge is saying something sensible and new while abiding by the rule, something you have done nobly.
Post by stacy (FINALLY back!) on Jul 1, 2009 14:57:08 GMT -5
I loved this. It flowed so well. There is nothing more beautiful than a graceful butterfly. Hard to believe that all were once ugly caterpillers lol. Nicely done. This was a most enjoyable read for me.