Post by Jamie~poetshare.forumotion.com on Nov 16, 2009 11:19:23 GMT -5
So I originally had posted this version for the TPS Challenge, completely ignoring that it was too long. The redacted (16-line) version follows--but I like the longer version better myself, so wanted to post it here.
So sure, she rules my pen with ease,
And when she does my dreams take flight
In truth, I seek my Muse to please;
Her gifts give play to dark and light.
My verse slave to her bark and bite:
The love she burns on page with heat,
The dire she drops as tears from souls,
The laughs we share with rhyme and beat;
The dark, as one, we pray light holds,
The truth and joy with pen she molds.
Those in our head that wait their turn--
Dreamt mice and men with tales to tell--
They know my muse writes thoughts that burn,
So wait in shades where hope doth dwell
'Til called to life; She knows them well.
This craft is one of shades and urge,
So pen in hand I wait on Muse,
Who comes to me with tales to purge:
My pen sets down (no time to lose)
Those words she seeks with dreams to fuse
~~
So sure, she rules my pen with ease,
And when she does my dreams take flight
In truth, I seek my Muse to please;
Her gifts give play to dark and light.
The love she burns on page with heat,
The dire she drops as tears from souls,
The laughs we share with rhyme and beat;
The truth and joy with pen she molds.
Those in our head that wait their turn--
Dreamt mice and men with tales to tell--
They know my muse writes thoughts that burn,
So wait 'til called; their lives she'll spell.
This craft is one of shades and urge,
So pen in hand I wait on Muse,
Who comes to me with tales to purge:
I write the dreams she seeks to fuse.
I can't help but wonder if I lost some of the meaning in the redaction . . .
So sure, she rules my pen with ease,
And when she does my dreams take flight
In truth, I seek my Muse to please;
Her gifts give play to dark and light.
My verse slave to her bark and bite:
The love she burns on page with heat,
The dire she drops as tears from souls,
The laughs we share with rhyme and beat;
The dark, as one, we pray light holds,
The truth and joy with pen she molds.
Those in our head that wait their turn--
Dreamt mice and men with tales to tell--
They know my muse writes thoughts that burn,
So wait in shades where hope doth dwell
'Til called to life; She knows them well.
This craft is one of shades and urge,
So pen in hand I wait on Muse,
Who comes to me with tales to purge:
My pen sets down (no time to lose)
Those words she seeks with dreams to fuse
~~
So sure, she rules my pen with ease,
And when she does my dreams take flight
In truth, I seek my Muse to please;
Her gifts give play to dark and light.
The love she burns on page with heat,
The dire she drops as tears from souls,
The laughs we share with rhyme and beat;
The truth and joy with pen she molds.
Those in our head that wait their turn--
Dreamt mice and men with tales to tell--
They know my muse writes thoughts that burn,
So wait 'til called; their lives she'll spell.
This craft is one of shades and urge,
So pen in hand I wait on Muse,
Who comes to me with tales to purge:
I write the dreams she seeks to fuse.
I can't help but wonder if I lost some of the meaning in the redaction . . .