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Post by carousal on Oct 3, 2009 14:59:20 GMT -5
The Bowl, the Garden, I’ve played them all Las Vegas in the September Fall Caesars, Stardust, and the Sands Obliging girls, the one night stands My face on all the magazines Penthouse keys, stretch limousines ~ Still singing through my autumn years Though the young don’t want to hear My greying hair is touched with blue I sing the old songs, nothing new Though the voice is clear, the pitch still perfect I’m doomed to haunt the granny circuit ~ But I’ll never quit the spotlight glare Wheel me on in my old wheel chair I’ll sing for a dollar or one thin dime Strike up the band, just one more time This aging idol doesn’t give a damn So give me the intro, play it Sam
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Post by apocalypticjay on Oct 5, 2009 12:52:37 GMT -5
Yet again the wit and brilliance of your quill has lead us on a journey of an aging 'star' in his own right. Deeply inspired piece that really makes the reader want to smile all the way through, great writing Cari you're a real talent!
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Post by Harklight on Oct 5, 2009 18:40:01 GMT -5
A charmed write, capturing the essence of eternal musicians, Cari. Old muso's never really seem to grow old - music keeps them younger than years. Bravo for this write. H x
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Post by Artemis on Oct 7, 2009 10:20:21 GMT -5
Great write Cari ... wonderful insight, creativity and a fabulous rhyme scheme. THere are so many stars that this would describe ... Cliff bloody richard springs to mind ROFL ..... seriously Bing Crosby ... Frank Sinatra ... James Brown ...
great read, Kerry xx
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Post by silverhenge on Oct 28, 2009 0:28:36 GMT -5
This brought to mind Frank Sinatra and all those other MOR greats. Superb rhthym and imagery conjured up the era really well. Much enjoyed
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