astroannie
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Baseball Poetess
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Post by astroannie on Sept 24, 2009 13:09:02 GMT -5
I hear music in the silence I hear music in the noise
The music of the ether The music of the Fey
It sounds like nothing It sounds like everything
Someone tuning a radio Someone tuning a fiddle
Switching between songs Switching between stations
Too quick to really listen Too quick to really hear
Just when I think I understand Just when I think I recognize
It changes again It changes again
I take pills to make it better I take pills to make it stop
I hear nothing in the silence I hear nothing in the noise
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Sarah
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~Everything happens for a reason~[ss:Autumn]
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Post by Sarah on Sept 25, 2009 10:48:39 GMT -5
Oh wonderful! I love the concept of the "fey's music" and to use it as a almost "psychedelic episode" is very original. I got the sense of almost despair at having gotten rid of the "music." You paint such a vivid picture. Very much enjoyed ! ~Sarah
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Post by Artemis on Sept 28, 2009 4:41:16 GMT -5
Loved the couplet form the flow and they feeling of frustration here. Great work Annie, sorry I missed this, K xx
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Post by apocalypticjay on Oct 5, 2009 12:16:06 GMT -5
I loved this at TPS and I love it here too annie great writing my friend
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