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Post by gentlewind ~~(Serenity) on Apr 25, 2009 9:45:25 GMT -5
A heart is a ripple of personality It flows freely from within us
Our nature is revealed by its content With or without a spoken word Emotions do touch others
There is no deceiving The real person beneath There is always a crack In the Persona we expose
Like a ripple in a pond We pass a piece of who we are With every foot step we take leaving imprints as we go Be it harmony, envy or strife
We hurt the innocent at heart Without thinking Just by one ripple The chain takes effect
Let your heart be a wave of peace Good will towards all With every foot step you take
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Post by stacy (FINALLY back!) on Apr 25, 2009 14:46:35 GMT -5
Well said, and the photo really added that extra wow to this poem. Very nicely written and thoroughly enjoyed.
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Post by gentlewind ~~(Serenity) on Apr 25, 2009 20:44:19 GMT -5
Thank you for repling to my poem.
hugs
gentlewind
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Post by Ebonfire on Apr 26, 2009 15:36:52 GMT -5
This just exuded an inner joy that has to be the radiance from your soul. Beautiful write.
~Peace, C2W
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Post by polonius on May 12, 2009 16:52:30 GMT -5
I think the phenomenon you describe here is called 'The Pulse of Life'; lies are always transparent. When we let people deceive us, it's out of love or fear or hope, but not because they have succeeded in being opaque.
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Post by apocalypticjay on May 13, 2009 8:37:00 GMT -5
Thought provoking in an elegant manner, beautiful picture, you have a tender heart. A thoguhtful insight into the depth of reality and societies everything we say and do to to others can cause violent or hurtful chain reactions, a really good poem much enjoyed!
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