Post by Jamie~poetshare.forumotion.com on Sept 2, 2009 18:25:44 GMT -5
Great stuff, Kerry. The underlying nature theme is subtle, as our attention is turned to the colors and fragrances you cast our way, yet they're only distractions from the freedom, love, and positive abundance of emotion in thie write! *exalt*
You are out of the gate and running Kerry, setting free your imagination, doesn’t that feel great? To me your writing is moving on at a pace and I think as with other members here, that Jamie’s place is producing some fine poems; maybe we have just that little more time to read and benefit from other members work and so improve our own.
I enjoyed this piece immensely; I may just alter one word as it fits a tad better
The summit is staring, it’s where I belong. The summit is calling, it’s where I belong.