Counting Bodies Like Sheep

[Max]

Every night, when my eyes grow heavy with sleep
I lay my head down, though my body grows weak
My mind grows stronger as dreams begin to creep
As I recall those that I loathe…
I COUNT THEIR BODIES LIKE SHEEP

You cannot imagine what I would give
To ensure that not one Neo-Nazi may live
Another day amongst their wicked bunch
Those wishing Holocaust are deserving of such
I COUNT THEIR BODIES LIKE SHEEP

Murderers and rapist across the wide world
Anyone who has harmed innocent boys and girls
My clenched fist has much fury to unfurl
Upon these animals who walk in our streets
I COUNT THEIR BODIES LIKE SHEEP

Those who view material gain above humanity
Penny-pinching while the masses bathe in calamity
If I had it my way, into their graves would they leap
They have no souls, only their bodies do they keep
I COUNT THEIR BODIES LIKE SHEEP

Aggravation expressed in biting condemnation
May a plague wash them away from our nation
And from all nations, cast them into the sea
I urge them out of the shadows, to pick a fight with me
Oh how lucky they are that I only kill them in my sleep
I COUNT THEIR BODIES LIKE SHEEP

[Harklight]

Stunning writing, Max!! The repetitions reinforce this very strongly. I felt your controlled rage here and relate to the issues you present. Great rhyme and control through an emotive piece. My temperature just went up too:
"Those wishing Holocaust are deserving of such"
"Murderers and rapist across the wide world
Anyone who has harmed innocent boys and girls
My clenched fist has much fury to unfurl"
"Those who view material gain above humanity"
Deserving of a Super-hero cape but my well-wishing contibution will be an exalt. H x

[Jamie~poetshare.forumotion.com]

*ugh* Outstanding, Max. Hits like a punch to the gut with visuals that evoke Clive Barker at his most pissed. *exalt* from me as well, and I'll go huntin' for it at TPS.

[apocalypticjay]

~Standing ovation~ me and my beliefs hehe. This was truly awesome the concept of counting those you wish the demise of like sheep is very profound that alone was brilliant, but the added frustration and depth continued into your righteous heart and brought home political correctness which should be adressed yet again. Brother this was awesome as always...oh yeah EXALT!