Wonderful write, Jamie! Fantastic intro, you give chosen dream images life - and a great outro. Solid rhyme scheme and rhythm makes the piece. If you hadn't dreamed, we wouldn't have PS. *sighs Dream well, dear friend. H x
"Great spirits have always encountered violent opposition from mediocre minds." ~ Albert Einstein
Geez Jamie way to make us all look bad lol. You are such a talented poet. The imagery in this is outstanding and you describe the bliss of the daydream perfectly. I love to daydream and i do it often...not really a good idea when you're driving to class but i haven't run off the road yet . Incredible Jamie!
"If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you it's yours forever. If it doesn't then it was never meant to be."