Cryogenics <harsh language>

[Sarah]

*not really sure where this came from...just kind of started writing*

Tossed about like a cork in the tide
So thank you, what an incredibly exhilarating ride
It's time now for this game to come to a stop
Get the f*ck down from that high horse you're atop
My patience now strained, kindness abused
Should have known all along I was being used
How painfully stupid my behavior has been
At least I know now what eluded me then
Angel on earth I've been for too long
About f*cking time I realized what was wrong
I hope you had fun with this southern belle
For tonight that part died, welcome to hell!
My tongue now sharper than ever before
Sugar coating I've stomped on the floor
Thorn in my side, royal pain in my ass
No more shit will be tolerated by this Irish lass
So tired of walking on eggshells for years
Never thought I'd be one to cry bitter tears
For too long my mouth has been clamped shut
Oh, too late for sorry, you're stuck in a rut
Heart of gold has turned to steel
So now tell me, how does that make you feel?
To know that you froze this warm hearted mess
Finally creating an ice princess!

[Max]

Though there is a good deal of anger here, I can definitely feel almost a biting, "that's what you get" kind of tone in this one my dear. Lord have mercy on anyone who provokes your wrath... not used to this style from you, but the product is sensational Sarah. Mwuah for the ice princess

[Harklight]

Wooo, someone ticked Sarah off, big-time!! Fantastic rhyme for such an angry, "cop this", in-your-face type of poem. Look out South Carolina: the big freeze is arriving early. Really "felt" this one. Great writing. H x

[apocalypticjay]

Wow, that kinda kicked me off my bed with anger and frustration at somebody who has seemingly played around with your heart and your mind for to long and its time for you to get over him and start living! You go girl!!! hehe x