*not really sure where this came from...just kind of started writing*
Tossed about like a cork in the tide So thank you, what an incredibly exhilarating ride It's time now for this game to come to a stop Get the f*ck down from that high horse you're atop My patience now strained, kindness abused Should have known all along I was being used How painfully stupid my behavior has been At least I know now what eluded me then Angel on earth I've been for too long About f*cking time I realized what was wrong I hope you had fun with this southern belle For tonight that part died, welcome to hell! My tongue now sharper than ever before Sugar coating I've stomped on the floor Thorn in my side, royal pain in my ass No more shit will be tolerated by this Irish lass So tired of walking on eggshells for years Never thought I'd be one to cry bitter tears For too long my mouth has been clamped shut Oh, too late for sorry, you're stuck in a rut Heart of gold has turned to steel So now tell me, how does that make you feel? To know that you froze this warm hearted mess Finally creating an ice princess!
Though there is a good deal of anger here, I can definitely feel almost a biting, "that's what you get" kind of tone in this one my dear. Lord have mercy on anyone who provokes your wrath... not used to this style from you, but the product is sensational Sarah. Mwuah for the ice princess
Chairs thrown and tables toppled Hands armed with broken bottles Standing no chance to win, but We're not running, we're not running
Wooo, someone ticked Sarah off, big-time!! Fantastic rhyme for such an angry, "cop this", in-your-face type of poem. Look out South Carolina: the big freeze is arriving early. Really "felt" this one. Great writing. H x
"Great spirits have always encountered violent opposition from mediocre minds." ~ Albert Einstein
Post by apocalypticjay on Oct 5, 2009 12:35:49 GMT -5
Wow, that kinda kicked me off my bed with anger and frustration at somebody who has seemingly played around with your heart and your mind for to long and its time for you to get over him and start living! You go girl!!! hehe x