Sarah wonderful form and flow to this piece and how very sad. Your heart seems so hurt and lonely right now .. if this is fiction it sure tugged at my heart strings, keeping love a secret has its pitfalls and tears you apart, so well written, exalt. K xxxx
love is a very complex emotion yet, taken basically, very simple. In the perfect world, then love can always shine between two people, as I'm sure they would both want it.. however, in the real world sometimes other people's feelings get in the way..
I have the idea in this that the persons who's feelings are hurt is one of the two in love, that the other one is just in it for the sake of "playing her".. If this is true, then I would argue that this is not really love, but an attraction going nowhere. Love must be shown on both sides to be real.
I do hope that this poem is just you telling a story that happens so often in life. Some guys think being a "player" makes them special. These guys wouldn't know love if it hit them and trust me, one day it will and I can only hope the girl they do fall in love with plays them instead.
tc my friend, enjoyed
Dreams do come true, you just have to have faith in them.
Post by apocalypticjay on Oct 5, 2009 12:30:18 GMT -5
Sarah your poems of late are brilliant you have depth meaning, true feelings that burst on to the page in fireballs of emotions leaving the reader stunned and suprised in both good and bad ways pulling at the hearstrings with some great poetry!!! x