A Diamond's Worth

[Sarah]

*A totally fictional poem everyone, things in my life are great*

What a wonderful play that must have been
Deceit and lust, oh what luscious sin
To watch her eyes for the slightest change
Just to see if she carts you to the firing range
Yet once again you'll get away free
Evidence in front of her face she'll fail to see
Blinded by this pseudo-noun she calls love
Blackened angel thrown down from above
Not even worthy for her to tread upon
I pray just once I get to see your day dawn
Snake in the grass with a devil's smile
Never could say no to the vixens' wile
I should know, I too bear your scar
In that show, you were the star
Knowing every word to say, memorizing every line
Oh I longed to rip out your heart along with mine
Open your eyes girl, why can't you see
Little do you know, the other woman was me.

[Max]

BRAVO! Bravo bravo bravo bravo... bravo.

Having played the part of the "other man" before, your take on the perspective of the cruel "other woman" is sinfully delightful. I must exalt this

[carousal]

Such an intense poem which could only be from a female pen, no male could write this. I sense a tug of war over a male that very probably is not worth the effort, let alone the shared love of two women.

[Ebonfire]

Well done Sarah from the other woman's perspective. Nice read, Vicki