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Post by cinda on Jul 22, 2009 5:49:26 GMT -5
I CREATE UPON
Hand over my eyes, Block out the light – Another work day is ended. Horizontal bed feels wonderful Buzz in my ears of the furnace. My mind is a blank – A content relaxed no noise blank. Ears still decompressing Constant buzz in them till it fades.
Recapturing moments like snapshots In my head of the day – How quickly it turns to night time.
Myself once removed My private space is who I am An endless Joy of dreams, Aspirations to dwell upon.
Such moments precious as they are Reassess my goals These are the things I create upon With new visions, And old ones complete.
~ Cinda A. Berard All rights reserved
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Post by polonius on Jul 22, 2009 6:26:00 GMT -5
It is important to reflect upon what we have done and learnt, and to take time to see if we can identify some theme in our lives.
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Post by Max on Jul 22, 2009 20:30:21 GMT -5
I really liked this piece. I'm used to rhyming poetry, but this made me pay special attention to the content, and I really liked the subject matter as well, being your creative process and the thoughts in your mind. Very much enjoyed!
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