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Post by Jamie~poetshare.forumotion.com on Jul 16, 2009 6:22:31 GMT -5
The Power Of Observation:
Far too many things to mention Make demands on my attention Still, I've gladly taken time to Construct this simple rhyme for you Now, to test your comprehension:
I love puzzles, tricks, and gaming, Cleverness that goes unnaming Riddles rooted in obvious Clues to which you're oblivious Some will win, the others shaming.
Let begin this ritual birth! Take these words for what they're worth: Twenty Karma divvied neatly Or if found and played discretely All for you: now, clues unearth.
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Post by Max on Jul 16, 2009 20:12:30 GMT -5
Upon reading this, I felt like I was playing Jumanji or something. Hmmm... I have 19 karma. Maybe something magical will happen when I get 20? I really liked the way you wrote this and the language you used. *Scratches his head as to what Jamie is up to*.
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Post by Jamie~poetshare.forumotion.com on Jul 16, 2009 20:27:02 GMT -5
Don't give up.
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Post by ladyoftheword on Jul 17, 2009 2:51:47 GMT -5
Jaime!! I like it! We have something in common. Have you every tried Cryptograms...they are my fav!!!! I just love puzzles altogether. Very intriguing poem and I wish you the best.
C
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Post by Jamie~poetshare.forumotion.com on Jul 17, 2009 11:35:29 GMT -5
Solved by two members so far.
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Post by Ebonfire on Jul 31, 2009 7:07:11 GMT -5
Crossword puzzles and word searches are my forte. Knew you were a gamer Jamie. Ebonfire
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