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Post by Max on Jul 16, 2009 11:53:38 GMT -5
Where are you now, my darling? I cannot wait to have you in my sight Recalling how you betrayed me But I have made peace with your wrongs Even though you have played me You knew I’d take you back, with open arms It’s been so long since I’ve seen you last I cannot wait to have you on your back I long to have the fluid flowing When we engage in this unspeakable act There you are my love I thought that you had been hiding from me Come closer to me now I thought that I lost you, but now you are found I grow rigid at the sight of your sultry skin Licking my lips at the anticipation of the oncoming sin That we both are about to take part in My love You look so precious tonight, my darling At long last you are in my sight With a pull of the trigger, my rifle whispers for me, saying “So long, I love you, and good night” NOTE: If you are unsure why I have chosen this picture, this may require a re-read. Hope you liked
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Post by Jamie~poetshare.forumotion.com on Jul 16, 2009 11:56:43 GMT -5
now that's good use of and extended metaphor! *chuckle* Pity the poor woman who scorns YOU! *exalt*
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Post by Artemis on Jul 16, 2009 12:25:17 GMT -5
Fantastic write with a great twist at the end .... You are a fantastic story teller Max, this was superb. K exalt
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Post by matw63 on Jul 24, 2009 3:25:35 GMT -5
I too pity any woman that scorns you, this is nasty! Well penned and enjoyed. Mat
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Post by polonius on Jul 24, 2009 3:29:38 GMT -5
Women are certainly out of line when they do their scorning thing, especially when they make a chap rigid. After all, women are quite furious when they are scorned.
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Post by Max on Jul 27, 2009 13:39:24 GMT -5
Glad you all enjoyed this! Indeed, mercy shall be none for any girl who dares scorns the CLIMAX! This was so much fun to write... and I'm quite glad that it's a fiction.
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