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Post by Jamie~poetshare.forumotion.com on Mar 12, 2010 8:42:28 GMT -5
When I find out who did it I will rend you limb from limb You don't have to admit it--chances to escape me? Slim. For though I'm not a person to lightly embrace the dark, Your victim was the worst one you could ever choose to mark.
You dare to say you speak for me without asking my thoughts? Well, now you'd better run from me and pray you don't get caught For I tremble with fury at the thought of what you've done. With darkness flowing purely, I will torture you for fun.
With mad anticipation now I seek to draw you out Your clever machinations failed, for you have not sown doubt But rather woke the Dragon who was cozy in the den I hope you found it worth it for you'll never rest again.
You should've held your tongue before you hurt my sister, friend. Your ignorance will cost you for my hunt will never end. And when I'm done with you no one will dare to speak your name For when you wake the Dragon you'll be burned for playing games.
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redbud
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Post by redbud on Mar 12, 2010 21:15:29 GMT -5
Dear Dragon, Please kick back and listen to a lullaby or two. You were much happier snoring than snortin' all that fire. No doubt the perpetrator will stew in his own juice without your help anyhow. Bud
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Post by NewMan™ on Mar 13, 2010 3:22:59 GMT -5
anyone foolish enough to wake this dragon will get burned. the anger in this poem leaps off the page and bites.
let us pray the dragon goes back to sleep and all is well in the kingdom.
take care Jamie,
~ Daniel
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Post by Artemis on Mar 13, 2010 10:52:23 GMT -5
Gosh Jamie this is angry stuff ... whoever has hurt your friend and you, well let them stew in their own nasty juices ... anyone who hurts my friends or yours deserves your wrath ... spitting feathers myself, Kerry xxxx
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Post by windowflower on Mar 13, 2010 23:13:33 GMT -5
I sure wouldn't want that dragon mad at me your form, rhythm and rhyme are superb and just makes this piece roll.. it's a pleasure mr. J
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